Mental Prisons 6-42

I'll write this critique to cover the entire chapter utilizing my superheroine OC, the Ace. First, thank you for including her in your larger tale. Good job creating a recognizable version of the character's outfit. As my comments on individual images suggest, I believe you did a good job of showing her confident superheroine persona in the introductory images where she comes upon the "frozen" police officer. The middle section, the "action" phase, is logical and demonstrates her losing confidence as she the villainess' device proves more powerful than the Ace's abilities. Finally, her despair as she ends up immobile and in the control of the villainess is believable. Throughout, the art is understandable and coherent in progressing through the story. I enjoyed reading it!